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for a long time, we were middl

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for a long time, we were middles.

winter leaves
with piteous cries
and the leaves rustle
with the hope of leaving.

september passed
in a haze of
absolut lust
and i grew used
to the southern comfort.

vancouver beckons
with his Burton tees
and i stole his smile;
the way he stole my heart.

you wrote cliches
that weren't cliches once
two times
upon a train

and i took my greyhound
with a video camera
imagining that this
was what you saw.

life happens
and truth creeps in
and we lived the middles
we couldn't write

ran out of words
a long time back
and i can't be her anymore.
stuck. stolen. saved.

and you say
it feels like a conclusion...

for a long time, we were middles.
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JunozPP's avatar
life happens
and truth creeps in
and we lived the middles
we couldn't write


It should be mentioned that this is the last thing I've read today. Every other reply or post came before this.

We're still middles. Let's be honest, we still can't write poetry with direction :P it's still just catchy introduction, lots of shit to fill it out and then a shattering conclusion. But you know what? All this shit, right now, in the middle is what makes the conclusion so awesome. We're still middles. This is still the middle. Let's make this middle the best second verse we ever wrote. I'm excited :)